Tip 4: Shorten and Remove Unnecessary - Deepstash

Tip 4: Shorten and Remove Unnecessary

Remove long sentences, unnecessary explanations, and unnecessary details. The shorter and clearer the text, the easier it is to convey the meaning. Check the text for stop words and syntactical errors.

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Simplify your business writing

If you find yourself writing or reading long, complex sentences at work, edit and reedit them so that they express the gist in fewer words. 

Do this repeatedly and over time you'll automatically accustom your brain to shorter, clearer wordings.

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